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AWESOME! Applejack So Nice. Everyone Loves Her. Everypony Loves Her. If Someone Who Helping Peoples And Ponies To Do Him/Her a Favor, That's Applejack. She's Always Looking Out For Her Sister And Her Granny. I've Been On a Barn When I Was Little. Sweet. I Wish I Go Back In Time To Be Like Applejack. But, I Should Get a New Barn Someday. I Loves Applejack. If I Live With Her On Her Barn At Breakfast, I Should Eat Cereal Called "Apple Jack". If She Tried It, She's Love It. Her Legs Is Amazing. Her Boobs Is Huge! WOW! AMAZING! ^^
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AleximusPrime Featured By Owner May 9, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
just so you know this is not a critique.

When you give a critique, you talk about THE ART ITSELF and what you think is good while also pointing out the bad and giving advice on how it can be improved if necessary.

For example:

Wow, nice job with this!  You did great with the shading and lighting and the linework is spectacular!  Definitely sexy!  <3  Only thing I suggest is improving the anatomy a bit, and her boobs are a tad bit too big for my taste.  The background seems ok though a bit simple though I guess it works.

That's just a little taste of what I'm looking for.

What you did was the total opposite.  All you did was talk about how much you love Applejack and stuff.  Talking about the character is not the same as talking about my art.  You would have been better off just making that a comment though then again that would be just as annoying considering you just blabber on and capitalize every single word you use which is not grammatically correct by the way.

If you want to get by on this site and not get yelled at by people for abusing the critique option as you just did, you best not use the critique option anymore or else just come back years later when you've learned how to do it.
CodyTheFastestFox Featured By Owner May 9, 2016  Student Artist
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